Articles | Volume 17, issue 2
https://doi.org/10.5194/se-17-347-2026
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New insights on the fault structure of Bedretto geothermal testbed and the associated seismicity based on active seismic crosshole tomography
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- Final revised paper (published on 26 Feb 2026)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1094', Anonymous Referee #1, 28 May 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Miriam Schwarz, 17 Jul 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1094', Anonymous Referee #2, 09 Jun 2025
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Miriam Schwarz, 17 Jul 2025
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EC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1094', Ayse Kaslilar, 21 Jun 2025
- AC3: 'Reply on EC1', Miriam Schwarz, 17 Jul 2025
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AR by Miriam Schwarz on behalf of the Authors (28 Aug 2025)
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AR by Miriam Schwarz on behalf of the Authors (26 Nov 2025)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (02 Dec 2025) by Ayse Kaslilar
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ED: Publish as is (03 Feb 2026) by Michal Malinowski (Executive editor)
AR by Miriam Schwarz on behalf of the Authors (09 Feb 2026)
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The article highlights the work on active seismic tomography by building a 3D velocity model using two different approaches, e.g., thin- and fat-rays in a geothermal testbed characterized by a fault structure and associated seismicity. 8 boreholes available in the vicinity of the study area were used for this purpose. The results are correlated with the wireline logs and the geological observations. The article in its present form has several deficiencies in terms of technical details, presentation of the results, and the conclusion. Please find the attached .pdf file with specific comments highlighted over each row. Here, I am only mentioning the main points from my side. They are as follows:
1. The title involves four keywords: fault-structure, geothermal, seismicity, and tomography. Currently, the "Introduction" section provides no information on the geological setting of the geothermal testbed, the main fault structure (MFZ), and the seismicity in the area. In my opinion, this information should be introduced briefly, clearly stating the problem statement.
2. A major work is required on the figures. For example, in Fig. 1a, it is very hard to read anything in the inset figure - the same goes for the legends used to describe the geology. Fig. 1b shows the fault zone, but is not described at all anywhere in the text, only referenced in section 3 dedicated to data description (Row - 103). A proper re-writing of the figure description is also required.
3. Section 5 requires a major re-schuffling in my opinion. It was very odd to read the inversion setup, then the tomography comparison between thin- and fat-rays, and finally visualize the velocity model. In my opinion, section 5.3 should be first with information on inversion setup, then 5.2, and finally 5.1.
4. More technical details are required on the tomography. Currently, it is only descriptive without full details! I suggest also showcasing the picks against offset information or a similar approach, a resolution test for the obtained 3D velocity model (checkerboard?), ray-path coverage, etc., to provide the readers more confidence.
5. Section 5.7 should be rewritten. Currently, it lacks a proper flow of information. There are a lot of sudden jumps between sentences without proper explanation. I could not understand what the author(s) mainly want to convey here.
6. Several claims were made in the conclusion without any discussion or proper description in the article. For example, it is being said in Row-345 that "ray tomography is less dependent on the model parametrization of the forward and inversion grids (compared with thin rays)" without a discussion in the article.
7. At places, a few words had been very loosely used. A few examples are: 'a remarkable spatial correlation' (Row-9), 'a nice signal-to-noise ratio' (Fig. 2), 'we show in this paper' (Row-184), 'in the middle of the volume' (Fig. 9), etc. I suggest avoiding such a form of writing unless it is clearly defined what it means.
8. Lastly, throughout the article, several other studies done in the same site have been referenced. At times, the main outcomes of those studies are either not stated or the main information is only described. In my opinion, those results should be shown in this article rather than just referencing the readers to them, especially when we are using that information to cross-check our results. For details, please see the .pdf file.
I hope the provided comments are valuable to the authors and will help in rectifying this article.